Can you please check this paragraph and let me know if it makes sense? Its a presentation im going to give. I wrote it. Does it make sense?
Dajiahao jintin shi xing qi san yue. Wo lai jiashao yixia wo yitian.
Wo yihou quchiang, wo xilian, wo shuaya, he wo xizao. Wo chi zaofan: liu er shi dian ranhou ? qu cheng Xiao che liu wu shi dian. Wo dao xuexiao qi dian.
Wo qu ba men ban xuexiao: fawen, zhongwen, shuxue, yingwen. Wo de ban kaishi qi er shi dian. zhao zai wo you san ban. Tamen shei: fawen, shuxue, he yingwen. Wo chi wufan yi shi dian.
ze wo you san ban men: tamen shei science, history, he sign language. Wo de last(chihou) ban shi wo zhongwen ban. Zhongwen zai women ting laoshi, shou gen tongxue, he xie zhongwen. Liang dian wo qu cheng Xiao che
Wo yihou fang, youshi kan dianshi, he yihou shangwang. Wo chi wanfan baba he mama wu dian. Yihou wanfan wo zuo jia ting zuo ye qi dian. Youshi shangwan ba dian. Wo Xiao jiu dian. Wo shuijiao er shi dian. Zhe shi wo de yitian. Xie xie!
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What i tried to say is this: After, I get up, I brush my teeth , and take a shower. I have my breakfast at 6:30 am and then take the school bus at 6:50 am. I arrive to school at 7 am. I take 7 courses at school, French, English, Chemistry, and History. My first class starts at 7:20. In the morning i have 4 classes. They are French, Math, English, and Chemistry. I take my lunch at 11. In the afternoon, I have 3 classes. They are History, Sign language, and Chinese. My last period of the day is Chinese. In chinese, we listen to the teacher, speak with our classmates, and write Chinese characters. At two o'clock, I take the school bus home. After I return home, I sometimes sleep and watch TV. I have dinner with my parents at 5 pm. After dinner, I do my homework at 7 pm. I go online at 8 pm. I take a shower at 10 pm and then go to bed. This is my typical day. Thank you!
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Actually there are many mistakes.
The correct way to say it should be:
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da jia hao ?
jin tian shi xing qi san ?san yue ???wo lai jie shao yi xia wo de yi tian ?
zai wo qi chuang zhi hou ?wo jiang hui shua ya ?ran hou xi ge zao ?
wo zai 6 dian 30 fen chi zao fan ?ran hou zai 6 dian 50 fen da shang xiao che ?
7 dian zhong wo hui dao da xue xiao ?
wo xu yao xue xi 7 men ke cheng ?fa yu ?ying yu ?hua xue ?li shi ?
di yi jie ke jiang zai 7 dian 20 kai shi ?shang wu wo you 4jie ke ?ta men shi ?fa yu ?shu xue ?ying yu he hua xue ?
11 dian zhong wo hui chi wu fan ?
xia wu wo you 3 jie ke ?ta men shi ?li shi ?shou yu he han yu ?yu wen ??
zui hou yi jie ke shi han yu ?yu wen ??wo men ren zhen ting jiang ?re lie tao lun ?xue xi xie han zi ?
xia wu 2 dian zhong wo da xiao che hui jia ?
dao jia hou ?wo yi ban shui jue huo zhe kan dian shi ?
wo he fu mu zai 5 dian zhong chi wan fan ?zai zhe zhi hou ?wo yu 7 dian zhong zuo zuo ye ?
wo yu 8 dian zhong shang wang ?
wo zai 10 dian zhong xi zao shui jue ?
zhe bian shi wo de yi tian le?
xie xie ?
Another ploblem: "I take 7 courses at school" 4 or 7?
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